MY BEST CARNIVAL MEMORY 
Since i didn`t use to live here i can`t talk much about spending carnivals, but i can remember that when i was young i went to every carnival with my parents and brothers. I use to enjoy the parade of the 84 street and admire all the dancers and people that appeard in this emotional act.
Even though i didn`t do much, l really enjoy all this time i could spend with my family.
Anyway my last carnival was 7 years ago.
posted by rocio at 1:47 PM
2 Comments:
great essay!!!
Why did you admire the dancers? Give us some more details, Rocio!! =)
This is a good start. Remember to revise for punctuation and capitalization.
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